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06-07-2008, 07:15 AM
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[WIP] Phoric
This is for my portfolio and new branding.
Thoughts? This is still in development, and the 'Listen, Explore, Create' will be replaced with other words, as they are not mine.
http://www.kalleload.com/uploads/zuv...feecpobkrk.jpg
Thanks in advance,
All critique welcome.
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06-07-2008, 03:10 PM
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It looks very nice, great job.
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06-07-2008, 04:55 PM
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I like.
But I do have a suggestion - you should change the Recent Work, and Aspire to Inspire headers to a different font, or size. At the moment, you have them identical to the "Listen, Explore, Create" components, and that means they are of equal importance, or have similar contents or functions.
It's important to separate this sort of stuff so that viewers don't get confused. I know it seems pretty obvious what belongs to what, but it's these minor details that will make your site look great.
Try just a flat font for the aforementioned headers. It may look cleaner and not distract away from your focal point - which seems to be those 3 buttons (Listen, Explo...etc).
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06-08-2008, 09:33 AM
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Originally Posted by Bryan Le
I like.
But I do have a suggestion - you should change the Recent Work, and Aspire to Inspire headers to a different font, or size. At the moment, you have them identical to the "Listen, Explore, Create" components, and that means they are of equal importance, or have similar contents or functions.
It's important to separate this sort of stuff so that viewers don't get confused. I know it seems pretty obvious what belongs to what, but it's these minor details that will make your site look great.
Try just a flat font for the aforementioned headers. It may look cleaner and not distract away from your focal point - which seems to be those 3 buttons (Listen, Explo...etc).
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Thanks a lot bryan. I'll work on those few things and update you.
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06-08-2008, 03:13 PM
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Originally Posted by farcannell
This is for my portfolio and new branding.
Thoughts? This is still in development, and the 'Listen, Explore, Create' will be replaced with other words, as they are not mine.
http://www.kalleload.com/uploads/zuv...feecpobkrk.jpg
Thanks in advance,
All critique welcome.
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That background is fantastic, did you create it yourself?
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06-08-2008, 03:31 PM
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As i've said to you before Blake i wish you'd stop claiming my designs as your own when i show them to you. Just cos you can't design yourself.
Jks. Great design mate as i've said <3. Keep us updated.
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06-08-2008, 03:40 PM
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Originally Posted by Vizon
That background is fantastic, did you create it yourself?
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Looks like the effect is that of a PSDTuts tutorial on the background...
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06-09-2008, 01:07 PM
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Originally Posted by Wildcard
Looks like the effect is that of a PSDTuts tutorial on the background...
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No, it was 100% my method. But please link me to the similar effect you're talking about.
@ Vizon, Yes.
Thanks guys, I'll keep you posted.
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